New Scene Outline
Now that we have got feedback on our idea from both Luke and Matt, this is the revised scene outline for our thriller
THE CHANGES
Before : The female character was a secretary
Now : The female character is the wife of the man who has been kidnapped.
Why? : We changed the character because both Luke and Matt explained that the setting of 'Office' was problematic because it is much harder to create the 'world' of an office in the limited studio space we have at our disposal and the limited time we will have on the actual shoot day. Casting this character as the Wife instead of a secretary means that we can use the setting of a kitchen for her end of the phone call. This is better because we can use the kitchen in the Ewhurst boarding house which is where we are filming the rest of the thriller. This will save time and effort on the day.
Before : We did not have much character development for 'The Killer'
Now : We plan to include a shot of 'The Killer' shooting one of the Henchmen after he gets blood on The Killer's shoes to show his mental instability and cruelty.
Why? : It is crucial to introduce the personality and skillset of your protagonists in the opening scene of a thriller. This addition to our thriller will show The Killer's cruelty and madness and this creates fear and tension - you don't know what he might do next. This will keep the audience engaged and involved in our opening scene.
THE CHANGES
Before : The female character was a secretary
Now : The female character is the wife of the man who has been kidnapped.
Why? : We changed the character because both Luke and Matt explained that the setting of 'Office' was problematic because it is much harder to create the 'world' of an office in the limited studio space we have at our disposal and the limited time we will have on the actual shoot day. Casting this character as the Wife instead of a secretary means that we can use the setting of a kitchen for her end of the phone call. This is better because we can use the kitchen in the Ewhurst boarding house which is where we are filming the rest of the thriller. This will save time and effort on the day.
Before : We did not have much character development for 'The Killer'
Now : We plan to include a shot of 'The Killer' shooting one of the Henchmen after he gets blood on The Killer's shoes to show his mental instability and cruelty.
Why? : It is crucial to introduce the personality and skillset of your protagonists in the opening scene of a thriller. This addition to our thriller will show The Killer's cruelty and madness and this creates fear and tension - you don't know what he might do next. This will keep the audience engaged and involved in our opening scene.
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