Feedback from Luke

As well as having a chat with Matt, we presented our idea to another teacher, Luke. He had similar opinions to Matt and liked our script. At first he thought it sounded like there was too much action until he read the script and saw how we had condensed it. He liked our script and the idea of the phone call. 
He also had helpful opinions on casting, giving us ideas of appropriate actors for The Killer and The Wife.
He felt the Ewhurst basement would be a great location for the torture scene. He also suggested that we use Adam's kitchen as the other setting and so we have emailed Adam to ask for his permission to use this in our shoot.

So far I feel as if our group has been working efficiently and we have produced some excellent ideas and research. We have used lessons productively and have been able to make best use of our lesson time by dividing up tasks for each member.